dimecres, 13 d’octubre de 2010

la cadira i la corda

Vaig dur la cadira i la corda al riu. La corda, jo i la cadira lligats damunt la sorra, mirant com baixa l'aigua cap a la mar. Un amor allunyat s'acomiadava l'última i fosca nit, amb l'oblit no calia parlar-hi i la mort no volia comptar minuts. Cap visió d'una tornada fou comptada dins l'única possibilitat, i la vida ara xiulava com si fos torb.

Alguna cosa a dins l'ànima, com si fos fons d'un mar, i una llum amb claror rugosa i ondulada va obrir un nou camí. I amb la mirada fugint cap amunt, li vaig jurar tot l'amor. L'infinit d'una onada, única cosa a albirar, i la cadira i la corda dins, i jo, a la sorra.

a proposta de Tens un racó dalt del món en el 177è joc literari - història sense 'e'

55 comentaris:

Jesús M. Tibau ha dit...

fantàstic. Espero que no em maleïu gaire per prohibir-vos fer servir la lletra E

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GEMMA ha dit...

Un escrit ben afinat.

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Felicitats, te n'has sortit prou bé sense la "e"

Salut!!!

Elvira FR ha dit...

Molt bo!

rits ha dit...

oh!! fantàstic!!!
es despren moltíssim sentiment i sense ni una e d'emoció!!!

ho he intentat i no me n'he sortit! m'he anat cap als Relats conjunts

Vicicle ha dit...

Bona història. A qui li fa falta la fotuda cosa gràfica amb forma cargolada? Salutacions. Buf, quina caboria.

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Ostres, què maco!!
Això és el súmmum, no tan sols fas l'escrit sense la E sinó que, a més, amb un to poètic preciós.

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Gràcies, realment això d'escriure sense E m'ha resultat complicat, per això estic molt content que hagi agradat.

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